I enjoyed all of this and could understand all the lines.You have quite a plot going and I will look forward to seeing more scenes:=) Wonderful work and it's fun to see you two spending time in such a "productive" manner!:=)
Oh dear...it's getting intense! :)You two are so good.
Sassafras, this is definitely the time to get angry! Remember to keep the grief in there too though, and try to make the anger more gradual. Like, maybe just shocked silence first/confusion, and work your way up. In music, paying attention to dynamics are important, you don't want too much of the same! Try and apply that to drama too, and I think it will make each line even more effective.
Simba, I think I would take more offense when Roger gets upset with you for suggesting that you could take Paris. And don't forget that you're grieved too. Or, if you're only feigning it, don't forget to feign it! :)
Also, here's an idea: Why don't you try performing it Reader's Theatre style until you get someone to film it for you. In other words, you would be standing next to each other and talking to each other, but you would be looking straight into the camera instead of at each other. That, or turn your bodies sideways, toward each other. I think it will be less awkward for you if you don't have to keep turning your heads to the side.
Again, great job! I love how expressive you both are.
I enjoyed all of this and could understand all the lines.You have quite a plot going and I will look forward to seeing more scenes:=) Wonderful work and it's fun to see you two spending time in such a "productive" manner!:=)
ReplyDeleteOh dear...it's getting intense! :)You two are so good.
ReplyDeleteSassafras, this is definitely the time to get angry! Remember to keep the grief in there too though, and try to make the anger more gradual. Like, maybe just shocked silence first/confusion, and work your way up. In music, paying attention to dynamics are important, you don't want too much of the same! Try and apply that to drama too, and I think it will make each line even more effective.
Simba, I think I would take more offense when Roger gets upset with you for suggesting that you could take Paris. And don't forget that you're grieved too. Or, if you're only feigning it, don't forget to feign it! :)
Also, here's an idea: Why don't you try performing it Reader's Theatre style until you get someone to film it for you. In other words, you would be standing next to each other and talking to each other, but you would be looking straight into the camera instead of at each other. That, or turn your bodies sideways, toward each other. I think it will be less awkward for you if you don't have to keep turning your heads to the side.
Again, great job! I love how expressive you both are.
Looking forward to the next scene!
Are you going to post more??? I love seeing all your script and videos and can't wait to see the rest of the story.
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