Great acting skills :) However, I think perhaps I would wait on the intense anger, Sassafras...perhaps you're too grieved to bother being incredibly angry? I would go for a more broken/I can't believe she's talking to me like this/too grieved to put a lot of energy into responding, rather than enraged. But that's just a suggestion!
Great acting skills :) However, I think perhaps I would wait on the intense anger, Sassafras...perhaps you're too grieved to bother being incredibly angry? I would go for a more broken/I can't believe she's talking to me like this/too grieved to put a lot of energy into responding, rather than enraged. But that's just a suggestion!
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