Act 1 Scene 1 Revised

If you could please leave any comments about Roger's first line would be wonderful. We want to change it, but don't know what to do with it. Thanks!

Act 1 scene 1

(Roger and Barbara are backstage speaking through microphones behind closed curtains)

Barbara- “Hello?”

Roger- “Hi Barbara? This is Roger, we are at the hospital and Diane had the twins. They also found out that she has a weak heart chamber. It is really bad and they don’t think there is much chance of her living. You should probably come down to see her while you can.”

Barbara- (in a stern and strained voice) “How much time are the doctor’s giving her?”

Roger- “A day at the most. Since we didn’t know her heart was weak, it has worsened and the strain of having Kenneth and Paris was too much.”

Barbara- “I’ll fly down as soon as I can book a flight.”

End of scene 1